#1
Can we make this a game for two?
I?d be your accomplice; you'd be my Romeo,
I?m dying to get in deep with you.
And if you only knew what it was like,
I?d steal that midnight sky just to name every star for you.
The way I see it I?ve got nothing to lose.
Good or bad; I?ll let you be the judge,
I just can't get you out of my head.
So do me a favor,
And never stop driving me crazy
Meanwhile I?ll try not to fall asleep in your arms,
But it?ll be hard on a night like this
Cause when you?re this in love,
Letting you go is hard to miss
Your heart beating is the only thing left to hear in my head,
The last thing I remember is every word you said
I?m running out of ways to show you how I feel,
But I?ll never run out of ways to feel for you
So please, don't take this to heart,
But you already have mine
#2
some of the lines didnt sound good together.

But it?ll be hard on a night like this
Cause when you?re this in love,
Letting you go is hard to miss


So please, don't take this to heart,
But you already have mine

those parts mainly. they just dont seem to make sense to me.

some great ideas there.
#3
ahh i love this...this was one you must of found, that you said you lost...i guess not anymore haha...good stuff...i really liked it
#4
Yeah, i agree with you on the

But it?ll be hard on a night like this
Cause when you?re this in love,
Letting you go is hard to miss

part.. i'm trying to think of something to replace it.. but as far as the "so please, don't take this to heart, but you already have mine".. thats my favorite part