#1
Heres the beginnings of a song im starting. Its played on clean, I started on tabbing out a small interlude-solo but got bored so i just improvise for now.
Attachments:
Clean (1).zip
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Last edited by NovemberRain273 at Jun 25, 2006,
#2
I like it alot, the use of the 16th notes and triplets make it a very catchy piece. Except I did not like when it goes into a weird rhythm with the full chords it just seemed out of place.

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#3
I really liked this intro. With all the hammer-ons and pull-offs gives it a much better sound.
I also liked it when the second guitar came in.
Nice stuff here.
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#5
Yea, i couldnt get the exact timing i wanted for the chord progression on GP4, i dunno why i did it like that, the way i play it is totally different lol.

THanks for the crits.
Alta Vera - My real life alternative rock band.
Ashen Spire - My personal metal band.

Super Mario, F-Zero & Dragonball Z covers!

PSN: whatev27

Let me ask you, does a machine like yourself ever experience fear?

#6
The main riff sounded great...i liked how you put the sixteenth notes on different beats in every measure...it gave it a very interesting feel. However, the rhythm of the solo's fast part kind of clashed with the main riff.