#1
love is not for all
at least not for me
why does it torment me so

( chorse)
never will i get love
never will i recive love
so why do i bother
why do i waste my time with love

love is not for me
never will it be
never on my side

never will i get love
never will i recive love
so why do i bother
why do i waste my time with love

i need to know one thing
is love always going to be aganist me
am i crused like this for ever

never will i get love
never will i recive love
so why do i bother
why do i waste my time with love
#3
It was allright, I little too bland. In my opinion, you use the word "Love" way too much, so, see if you can re-word some of the lines. I see this as more of a poem than actual lyrics, so I'd like to hear the final outcome.

If you have time, could you crit mine?

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=382266

And if ever You come near, I will hold up high a mirror.
Lord, I could never show you anything as beautiful as You.
Last edited by fenderfreak101 at Jun 24, 2006,