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ive got the beginning done..could i get some feedback?..dont worry if too many people say it suck, ill start a new one lol...ive done so maaaannnnyyy time....

ps: could somone help me find some words for the chorus? im kinda getting stuck on it ...


this song is about a friend who left my country after 2 years of friendship..


BEGINNING:


THIS YEAR WENT BY SO FAST
IT COULD NEVER LAST
WHY'D YOU HAVE TO LEAVE
AND MAKE ME HAVE TO GRIEVE

IT'LL SEEM SO LONG
THOUGH I KNOW IT'S JUST A WHILE
I MAY BE VERY WRONG
BUT IN MEANTIME I'LL


...LOL IM OUT OF WORDS FOR THE CHORUS...COULD ANYONE HELP ME??? TEH CHORUS SHOULD START WITH AN ACTION SEEING THAT I ENDED OFF WITH I'LL....
Anyone play gunbound? then add johnny93


....you must tap into: THE FORCE!
....or: THE FORCE! will leave you
....then, you will no longer have: THE FORCE!