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It's brief, namely because I'm not sure how or if to expand on it. I intentionally left it a little vague so although I had a certain topic in mind feel free to interpret it as you like. This is the first song I've posted so if you must slaughter it try to be constructive.

The feint of superimposed sharp edges
Tapered, honed and hollowed out; purged of incentive
Masticating draughts of lacquer
Teething on backbone

Sans label, sans five cent deposit
Half eaten crow gift wrapped in blistered foil

Neither salves nor solves
But ferments and foments



I'll also crit upon request, Thanks for looking