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i tried to write a more indepth piece with this. i hope you like it, slow song untill the ending, build up


Monolithic (hell on earth)


This statue peering over me
Monolithic as it stands
Mocks my own two eyes with
Its cold grey staring eyes
Fallaciousness surrounds me
Dilapidation draws me here
I sigh to let it out
You will not be found

Chorus
Monolithic statues fall
Harder with ever blow
but the taste of ash is pitiable
So who will you sacrifice tonight?

A man standing behind me
Lonely waiting to be heard
But the inaccuracy of the moment
Only made it harder to go
So as the wind breaks my smile
I turn to you, ?stay for a while?
My heart is beating out of key
Wont you please sing a c!

Chorus
Monolithic statues fall
Harder with ever blow
but the taste of ash is pitiable
So who will you sacrifice tonight?

Deceitfulness and ash
Falling from the sky
People stop to stare
As if they don?t know why
A hell on earth will come
A hell on earth today
A hell on earth above
Jesus everyday!


please tell me what you think, i will do the same for yours
MindFire!