#1
A little titleless song I wrote. Not the way I thought it would turn out to be...but not bad, if I say so myself.

[No title]

The trigger
Is waiting
To let me go and set me free
The trigger
Is patient
Always there to comfort me

Moonlight shines in your eyes
Clear reflection of your tears
Moonlight shines in your eyes
Clear reflection of your tears

The trigger
Is waiting
Till I get down on my knees
The trigger
Is patient
Waiting untill I'm ready

Moonlight shines in your eyes
Clear reflection of your tears
Moonlight shines in your eyes
Clear reflection of your tears

[Bridge]

Shot but I'm not dying
Shot but I'm not dying
Shot but I'm not dying
Shot but I'm not dying
On the sixth day God created mankind, I say it is a waste of time.
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#2
It seems a little repetitive, the only words that change are the ones in the third stanza, but it might work, I don't really know what kind of point or mood you;re trying to get across though.
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#3
It wasn't outstanding, and to me a little unimpressive from you... but a but of orignality here, and I suppose you had the idea and wanted to use it.

Alright, but I think you can do better