#1
Meh, I was just writing, and I came up with this yesterday. i dont think its as good as my other one, Macabre Fate, but, I still think its ok... Not great but still good enough. I think the ending is the best... And I'm rambling. Anywho, enjoy.

Death Phantom

V1

Lurking within
Within the shadows...
You can't escape
My icy grip
You will fall
By my hand

Chorus

I am darkness
I am death,
I live to see
Your blood,
Your death.

V2

When darkness falls
I arrive
When darkness falls
I'm alive
You will fall
By my hand.

Chorus

I am darkness,
I am death,
I live to see
Your blood,
Your death.

V3

I live to see,
Your pain,
Your suffering.
Nightmares made flesh,
In your head.
You will fall
By my hand.

Lurking within
Within the shadows...
You can't escape
My icy grip
You will fall
By my hand

Outro

Too late for your prayers,
Too late for your faith,
You will fall
By my hand;
Your spirit is mine.
Quote by MoogleRancha
It's like Fenriz and J. Read

"I'm so happy to love metal and stuff"

"I AM metal"
#2
I really liked it

Each line was short

but effective

'I am darkness
I am death,
I live to see
Your blood,
Your death.'

^^ it flows and sounds really good

nice work
Blah.
#3
Thanks man, not my favorite work though.
Quote by MoogleRancha
It's like Fenriz and J. Read

"I'm so happy to love metal and stuff"

"I AM metal"