#1
Just another freewrite, but I'm always wanting suggestions, so let me know what you think.


These walls hold me tight
But they are oh so far
From compensating for what I lost
That time I jumped
When I heard the cry
?Plan B! Plan B!?
I?d love to skip over this
And watch it die as it
Counterbalances
But we all know that
Teenage hearts are always
Way too offset
For any improvement or
Enlightenment
And I don?t think
Anyone ever got hurt
By acting their age
And if they did
They should have grown up
#2
read forum rules please, no "plz crit" in the titles
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