#1
So it has been quite some time since i have posted a song....more than a month i know that....anyway i was thinking about all the posers around when i wrote this, it isnt really about me as i am myself, but anyway on with the show


Disillusion
Mirror on the wall what do you see?
Am I as perfect as I want to be
Or have my actions begun to disgrace?

My reflections off of the lake
Rippled and tangled by the cresting waves (or wake?)
A crystallized tear runs down my face

From many peoples dull blank stares
I begin to feel that I am impaired
What have I done to deserve such a fate?
Was it the hidden truth, or the white lie
That has caused me to be a passerby?
Can this change, or am I too late?

The poser acting like a thief
I am ever changing like the autumn leaf
Nothing I do will be concrete.


thanks
Stephen
#2
Hmm...

It flows pretty well, but it doesnt really drag me in. I like though.

Just, nothing that particularly blows me away.

Mind checking one of mine if you have time?
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