#1
INTRO
all of our lives weve been living in these changes
following the paths of our idols
but never to know who we really are
were trying so hard to be someone else

VERSE
and well never find our one true self
cause thats someone that doesnt exist
were all carbon copies
there must of been something that we missed

CHORUS 1
because we are all the same
dont say your any different
because we all know your not
yea we all know your not

CHORUS 2
he wants to be like him...
and she wants to be like her...


VERSE
whatever happened to originality
being your own person
whats wrong with the world today
it seems like every second it worsens

CHORUS 2
he wants to be like him...
and she wants to be like her...

CHORUS 1
because we are all the same
dont say your any different
because we all know your not
yea we all know your not
#2
You have a nice idea going here. But you need to make it more personal. Expand it and write it as if it was about a boy and a girl who are trying to be like everyone else. For example, the girl gets implants and the boy buys a sports car. Yes, these are cliche ideas, but you get the pont. Write about someone who is trying to be something he's not.