#1
Okay, before anyone calls this song EMO and stuff. This song is about the many problems that Ive been through or am going through now.

Indifferent

Trying to open my mind to new things,
Why can't everything be what it seems.
Screaming my head out loud,
My life is over-rated,
When I'm locked in this crowd,
And I can't update it...

Why can't everyone just leave me alone,
Of the fact I've already shown, them about me.
The person they cant see,
The person of which is indifferent.

Opening up to new surfaces,
But theres nothing new bout this.
Finding out my way,
In this dark hole,
Of this I got to say,
I'm losing control...

Why can't everyone just leave me alone,
Of the fact that I already shown, them about me.
The person they cant see,
The person of which is indifferent.

(music)

Screaming my head out loud,
My life is over-rated,
When Im locked in this crowd,
And I cant update it...

Why can't everyone just leave me alone,
Of the fact that I already shown, them about me.
The person they cant see,
The person of which is...

Why can't everyone just leave me alone,
Of the fact that Ive already shown, them about me.
The person they cant see,
The person of which is...indifferent.
#2
Well done, I think it's true that people shouldn't flame songs like this and calling them emo because its about problems.

Okay the song lol, I can sing this to my self with an acoustic....imporvised....and it sounds okay, the rythm feels good and fits most of the time and is pretty smart. Well done.
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Nitelife
#3
Quote by J_J_Kool
Well done, I think it's true that people shouldn't flame songs like this and calling them emo because its about problems.

Okay the song lol, I can sing this to my self with an acoustic....imporvised....and it sounds okay, the rythm feels good and fits most of the time and is pretty smart. Well done.


Well, have of the time, people do flame songs. And yes, it does hurt. But, how do you even know my beat without even having me sing it to you?? I mean this is what gets me. And thank you.
#4
Opening up to new surfaces,
But theres nothing new bout this.
Finding out my way,
In this dark hole,
Of this I got to say,
I'm losing control...

i really like that verse.. overall i like the entire song its well written and flows nicely.. and the first verse is really good too and if u could crit my song, the lost cause, its be appreciated, peace bro
#5
i didnt realy think it was all that emo but thats just me i liked the chorus alot it sounded kool

crit mine its in my sig thanks
#6
Great work, nothing really to change, it flows well.

Mind checking the top one in my sig? thanks in advance.
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