#1
i started writing this song cause i have some guitar that sounds really good and i got kinda stuck on the lyrics, crit for crit and any advice on where to go with these and maybe a title


sometimes i need to learn to bite the bullet
your a hopeless case and i should have knew it
your broken past repair, tore yourself apart
you dont even see, theres notihng in your heart

i painted you a sunset, a picturesque scene
but you wore a shield, guarding your heart from me
and any pain you would feel.

i was never enough to satisfy you
but now i know what i have to do
so here is this bullet, take it
aim that barrel and pull it
severe the remaining ties from me

you were a lost cause before this started
i picked you up broken hearted
and tried to mend what i could
but you never learned to trust me
oh why cant you see ?
#3
yeah me too, great job on it, i dont like the title too much but try taking words from that last stanza and youll find more title options.

my latest is As the River is Bridged in my sig