#1
this shows you how messed up the world is, I can write a song about being high and ive never been high b4

Get Me Out of This Green Haze


V1:
stuck in a house and nuthin to do,
found the miracle plant with you.
We lit' er up and took a puff and all the stuff was so newww

Pre Chorus
Flashing lights and moving sounds
things just dont feel the same
laying on the floor , did i just feel it move??

Verse 2
Woke up after the first trip,
my head feels like lead,
opened my eyes to discover my best friend was dead
Tried to dial 911 but i didnt see the numbers , were so god damm retarded
we left the joint burnin

Pre Chorus
Flashing lights and moving sounds
things just dont feel the same
laying on the floor , did i just feel it move??

Chorus
Get me out of this green haze(im chocking on the fumes)
Get me out of this green haze
the walls of smoke are closeing in
and I cant find you.

Bridge(instrumental)

verse 3
Woke up in my bed, its 10 to 3
My parents are over my head and there staring at me.
Then dad sat down at the bed side, took out little bag and said
(spoken in a deep voise) Son dont tell tour mother
(pick slide)

Pre Chorus
Flashing lights and moving sounds
things just dont feel the same
laying on the floor , did i just feel it move??

Chorus
Get me out of this green haze(im chocking on the fumes)
Get me out of this green haze
the walls of smoke are closeing in
and I cant find you.
#2
I dont like it......just bad.....even for a not serious song(as i assume this is)

It seems thrown together........I don't sing about getting high.....and if your gonna do it dont be so up front.
#3
hah.
It's got potential.

Try recording it and sending me the link.
[pm]

Good job.

-M
#4
i dont post anything here really. Yet i was bored enough to look at this song, in my opinion you have no clue what your talking about (getting high)...
Voices cry out deep in the night,
The streets are empty again,
But whats the explanition for putting up a fight,
When San Diego's burning within...
#5
Yea, it wasnt really that good to be honest. I dont know, it just came off as stupid. Plus you spelt choking wrong
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#7
smokin' on a dooby...
when what do I see?
someone who does not smoke weed?
but makes fun of it i see...

i guess that thats ok
because its your opinion
but i also hope your jokin'
cus i smoke til im spinnin'

every day and every night
the chronic smoke helps dim the light
from my eyes, which both burn red
I guess you could say, that Im a pothead!

what a messed up world
i can rhyme yet i am high
the sober person's words unfurled
without metre+rhyme. Just lies.
Last edited by Rapid_Fire at Jun 27, 2006,
#9
Quote by Rapid_Fire
smokin' on a dooby...
when what do I see?
someone who does not smoke weed?
but makes fun of it i see...

i guess that thats ok
because its your opinion
but i also hope your jokin'
cus i smoke til im spinnin'

every day and every night
the chronic smoke helps dim the light
from my eyes, which both burn red
I guess you could say, that Im a pothead!

what a messed up world
i can rhyme yet i am high
the sober person's words unfurled
without metre+rhyme. Just lies.



Lol, I liked this better.
#10
If you never been high before then why write about it....you dont know what its like.
#12
Quote by xArCaDiAx
Yea, it wasnt really that good to be honest. I dont know, it just came off as stupid. Plus you spelt choking wrong

i totally agree with this. except i want to add that you also spelt "they're" wrong and also "your". and "we're"
i don't mean to be harsh, but i'd be surprised to see this even on mtv.
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