#2
Very close to being very good. The lead guitar is too mechanical. The rythym guitar is supposed to be exactly on beat and things like that, but the lead is supposed to play with it a little bit. The skills are there though, nice job.
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#3
I thought over all good just needs a little practice. I agree with those below that the lead is a little mechanical, so is the rythm for that matter but I think you just need to play it a few more times and get a little more comfortable with the song. Lead needs to let those notes ring right out. Maybe get yourself a compressor/sustain pedal or a Gibson! But Im just trying to be cunstructive its a Good Job!!

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