#1
so heres the most generic rebel teen pop-punk song, but somewhat in reverse, but thats ok, thats what were going for

V-

Should I,
Sink to other guys that you can date in your high school
I could be like them and then i wouldent be uncool
Mabey then Id find what it means to be a tool
Follow everyone and we'll conform to a new rule

Drinking on the weekends smokeing after the bell rings
But I wont play along dont want to do all these teen things
Mabey Ill be diffrent mabey Ill see what that brings
1, 2, 1234

C-
There's no turning back
Cuz i catch on quick
Let me catch my breath
As you take your pick
And it figures I dont figure how or when
It seems, I'm, Useless,

C/O-
C-
There's no turning back
Cuz i catch on quick
Let me catch my breath
As you take your pick
And it figures I dont figure how or when
It seems, I'm, Useless
It seems, I'm, Useless
It seems, I'm, Useless, Again

Generic indeed, but on purpose so no need to flame in that respect, wha'ddya think
#2
I really like it it's a great song and really should be a good pop-punk song :P

*can you please crit my song "a song from my heart"?
thanks