#1
http://home.comcast.net/~amnbex/Riff.mp3

Just a little poppy type thing I made up that I thought sounded cool. Crits? Does the chorus part come in too fast?

Thanks.

Edit: The mic I used to record this SUCKS.
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#3
The transition out is actually deliberate due to the lyrics (which are not sung by my Bob-Dylan-bad voice).

I'll crit yours when I get home, I'm at work now and have no speakers. Plus I might get fired if I did, ha.
Takamine EG531SSC - "Kim"
Fender Mexican Stratocaster - "Jessica"
-Texas Special Pickups
Crate Palomino v16 Class A Tube Amp

Well it's floodin down in Texas