#1
Please like check out at least he says he loves me and the book, the book was done completely improvised with my mate and the other is one of my bands songs i did an acoustic version of. Note that my recording equipment consists of one exceptionally bad quality headset mic for like skype and stuff :s

http://snowburn.dmusic.com/
"The Pick of Destiny"
#2
Playing is good, u should work on vocals on "at least he ..."
The book - same thing - I the guitar part is very good....but vocals are a little "out of key"
How would you like to be an egg? You only get laid once. It takes 4 minutes to get hard, 2 minutes to get soft. You share your box with 9 other guys. But worst of all: the only chick that ever sat on your face was your mother. So cheer up...