Hey all, here is a song I wrote last year...I think it's ok, so I'd like your opinion on it.
I didn't wanna wake up my parents while recording, so I do not sing it

There is just the Intro riff, a little of a verse and the solo part
P.S. I was playing on an acoustic, same reason as above...

(If you comment I will return the favor)

The song is called Welcome to My World:
link: http://www.inet.hr/~sgilli/wtmw.mp3
How would you like to be an egg? You only get laid once. It takes 4 minutes to get hard, 2 minutes to get soft. You share your box with 9 other guys. But worst of all: the only chick that ever sat on your face was your mother. So cheer up...