#1
re did this one...

vocals from shooter over at Guitars 101...


i played all guitars rest is the backing track...


let me know what you think

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#2
you slow down alot , nice tone though. you missed alot of parts. other than that, its great
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#4
Yea the solo was a little rough...my vibrato with bends suck ass but otherwise else i have a good vibrato...

any more?
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#5
a lot better than any of us could do, good job.
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#6
Good job, decent singer too. I never listened to the solo properly so I'm not sure if it went by the book, but it was a good listen, thanks for taking the time to do it.
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#7
Crit as I listen
Props for doing the live version, love it haha. Quite a few mistakes in the leads, and even the rhythm seems off in some parts. Timing needs some work. Solo needs a lot of work, you have the right idea, but it sounds like you learned it in 15 minutes and never slowed it down at all, just went straight to recording.

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