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Mr. Rik (not me!!) says:

No refrain yet, it hasn't got much more then a few couplets that read like a poem...can be a poem, designed to be lyrics. Anyhoo, don't have a melody yet either...suggest one.

CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM...no bashing (thank you)


Life takes a flight

Curtains Closed
Nothing to Hide
Money Flows
Life takes a Flight

Silence Falls
Dark Outside
Glass of Wine
Life takes a Flight

Balmy Air
Dimmed Light
Lazy Chair
Life takes a Flight

Howling Wind
Brings me Fright
Soothing Voice
Life takes a Flight
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#2
I really enjoyed that, I rarely look at these threads, 10/10 Your signature is hilarious lol.
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Quote by ctb
I really enjoyed that, I rarely look at these threads, 10/10 Your signature is hilarious lol.


Thanks!

EDIT: The guy who wrote this is very proud of himself right now.
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Last edited by Noor at Jun 29, 2006,