#1
Hey guys/girls (hiya Ally ) this piece is (i believe) completely different to my other stuff. i hope you all agree

CJW - if you haven't set up our 1v1 yet then can i use this piece instead?

Ally - thanks for your help with the title love ya

Ok, i've just started listening to Jack's Mannequin, incase you don't know who that is then it's Andrew McMahon from Something Corporate's solo project and it's had the same effect on me as Bright Eyes did so i hope you enjoy
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Give him enough rope... (And he'll hang you)

Retrace my fingers on your arm now
While you fall out of the clouds
And the feeling of uncertainty
Are your sorry when you hit the ground?
I might hate you but I?ll be there
With the stretcher and the men
And the truck with all the flashing lights
Yeah the ambulance

The medics got their hands on you
And I?m doing nothing in return
They?re screaming at each other
And ripping off your shirt
Why does that remind me of a while ago?
Back at your house in the summer
Where are the medics when I need them?

How?d you get there in the first place?
I doubt you took the stairs
All that actual work
Would?ve probably messed your hair
And I know you think I?m nothing useful
I?d probably agree right now
But I?m waiting for the next chance
To catch you when you fall

The medics got their hands on you
And I?m doing nothing in return
They?re screaming at each other
And ripping off your shirt
Why does that remind me of a while ago?
Back at your house in the summer
Where are the medics when I need them?

The clouds are gone and I?m watching
The clear skies from your room
In the hospital with it?s white walls
They say you?ll be getting out soon
I like to hope that they?re not lying
Because I?m sick of being alone
It?s not that I feel lonely
It?s just it?s too dirty to feel like home
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Last edited by Auals at Jun 30, 2006,
#2
You're welcome and I love you too .

The song is great, as always. I can't pinpoint any point that's particularly better than the others. Except the last two lines. Those really cap it off and end it really well. Great job and keep it up
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#4
Thanks guys, anymore?
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#5
Wow...very thoughtful and emotive, without going too far. Kudos and keep it up.
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#6
Wasn't bad, not really my style but still good.
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#7
Thanks guys anyone got anything ideas about fixing it up?
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#8
give em enough rope is a clash album. anyway, good job, like kbass, not really my style, but good.
#9
Thanks Green, i didn't know it was a clash album, interesting. THanks for the trivia
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#10
Why does that remind me of a while ago?
Back at your house in the summer
Where are the medics when I need them?

to be totally honest i dont like that bit
and the "medics" i feel is a bit overused
just my 2bob
With the blood of the ones he loved
Upon his filthy hands
He took a vow, never
Never to sin again.