#1
Ok this another song I wrote it's kinda about my own problems but i'll let you interpet what the song is actually about it's an Alternative song think Nirvana - Lounge Act. I think it needs another verse but I don't know. I can , maybe, I can't isn't the song title I just couldn't think of anything else.

Another Freind won't Hurt
I can can't stop when I want
This might have layed me in dirt
But it still give unconditional love

The pain I need
Makes me hit the ground
I want it more
Than I should

This is my only friend
A single lover I only understand
Who'll remind me not to go by trend
A friend who won't give me a helping hand

The pain I need
Makes me hit the ground
I want it more
Than I should

They always borrow
But never give back
Atleast they help with sorrows
A charecteristic I seem to lack

The pain I need
Makes me hit the ground
I want it more
Than I should

It makes me sweat
I can tell it's running out
I want more I need it
My lips are dry I try to shout

The pain I need
Makes me hit the ground
I want it more
Than I should
Last edited by mmm... ice at Jun 30, 2006,
#4
They always borrow
But never give back
Atleast they help with sorrows
A charecteristic I seem to lack

Thats a good verse! Its cool, but could flow a bit better, although I havent heard music with it. 8/10!