#1
I wrote this last night, and honeslty have no idea were to take it, so if you guys can help, that would be cool, any comments are very appreciated, thanks!
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New Intro.zip
#3
sounds like the music of goldeneye on the N64

sounds pretty groovy keep up the good work
#5
its cool. but why are you using drop-c. use c-standard. there is no reason to be using drop tuning hear.
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#6
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sounds like the music of goldeneye on the N64

sounds pretty groovy keep up the good work



LOLZZZzz!!!11! Actually that was pretty funny.

Good job though. I thought it was pretty good. 8/10.
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#10
i play a c-1 plus, but i changed the bridge pick up to a seymour duncan invader, great sustain, and the neck is still stock, the duncan designed, but the clean tones with the neck pick up are amazing i wouldnt change it ever, what do you play? and that with wings ablazed song was amazing by the way
#11
I play a black Omen-6 and love it, when i got it i wasn't able to spend too much money so i got the Omen because my teacher played a Damien and for the $300 dollar range It probably the best. Now that I have a little more money I was thing of getting another Schecter possible a C-1 Elite. I also thought about investing in some new pickups, possible the invaders, or dimebuckers. Thanks for the compliment about With Wings Ablaze.
#12
i love the riff, and when the when it changes to distortion it just sounds tits

8.5/10
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#13
sort of sounds like some Vampire emo song.


But...a good vampire emo song...
#15
Wow pretty good, i liked it. Add to it and put it into a full song, iut definetly has possibilities.
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#17
That intro is amazing. It sounds so awesome.
I timidly tried to write another riff for it, but I couldn't.
I'll take another look at this tomorrow.
I do like what you have, so keep working on this. This could be an amazing song, dude.
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#19
this is sweet, I would try writing a heavier riff right after what you have and then write the lead part and octave higher and mess around with it to make it a little different, just an idea...
#20
no i ahev this idea of a riff to go after it, i kinda want it to sound like the riff after the intro to my swee shadow, after the synth, but before the clean part, something like that, lol, i have a riff that i could change the key and it would work great, i just havent really had time yet, lol, thanks for the comments!!!


Hey, im sorry for posting back on my threads, i just get excited, lol, im not trying to bump my songs or anything, im just trying to talk to people, but i wont post as much anymore, sorry for the inconveniences. . .
Last edited by Schecter86 at Jul 7, 2006,
#21
no dude thats what the threads are for lol.

hmm thats actually a cool idea for a riff, let me know when you get around to it