#1
This is a song that has happened to me.

Falling Up

Im trapped in someone elses shadow,
I feel like Im ten feet below,
The longer I wait,
For another day,
To come...

Its hard to understand,
Who I really am,
As Im falling faster,
And I cant even move until you last her.
Its blowing my mind,
And Im going to be fine,
Cause Im falling up.

Its just harder to breathe,
When theres something on me,
Look, dont touch,
I think I drank too much, last night....

Its hard to understand,
Who I really am,
As Im falling faster,
And I cant even move until you last her.
Its blowing my mind,
And Im going to be fine,
Cause Im falling up.

Everyday, I wish it was easier.
Even now, I cant believe you love her.
And I, still call your name.
And I wonder, will everything be the same.

Its hard to understand,
Who I really am,
As Im falling faster,
And I cant even move until you last her.
Its blowing my mind,
And Im going to be fine,
Cause Im falling up

Its hard to understand,
Who I really am,
As Im falling faster,
And I cant even move until you last her.
Its blowing my mind,
And Im going to be fine,
Cause...Im falling up.


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#3
umm i have no issues with it.. dont completely understand it but that might be because im kinda in a zone at the moment . u dont have to fix anything itd prolly be better if i heard it sang . i say 7/10
#4
Quote by mrsmurder
wtf???


why the wtf? i thought this song was awsome, you whould send me the links to the rest, check out my new song childhood.
#6
on the whole, i like it. i don't get the phrase "last her." maybe it's just me, but it sounds like you kinda fell into the trap of "this MUST rhyme!" as i said...naybe it's just me...i don't always get things lol.
Originally posted by Grimster
This couple was doing like this romantic shoot like in there house, and all of a sudden a clown walked in and jizzed on the guys face. That is the true meaning of christmas.