#1
... Yeah, it starts out like this little depressed emo bitch boy, cheesy 80's style lyric thing. Then it just busts into a metal song on the last line, (when i start using caps). So yeah, haha if sombody has any ideas to finish this monstrosity help me out.

How gay is this, when the weekend rolls around again,
and im out'a smokes and liquid bread
and i aint got no ride to town
so i just sit around guitar in hand with no way to kill the time
playing jimi page and iron man- WHILE GIRLS WITH BIG TITIES ARE RUNNING THROUGH MY MIND.

haha yeah... and thats all i got
#2
thats hilarious dude
i suggest random chords at the metal part
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