Heres my first 3 songs, please tell me what you think of them

Songs are:

Save Me - First ever song, quite rocky
Dont Know - Second Song, very acousticy
Music Song - Doesn't have a name yet so I've just named it this. My most recent song
My 3 Songs.zip
are those seriouisly your first 3 songs? youve got some midi skills. i enjoyed them lots!

keep it up, thanks for the listen.
Wow, those were actually good for your first songs. Way better than my first lol.
I really liked the acoustic one, it was my favorite. And I also loved all the string parts, very cool. And they all had good solos, in the minor pentatonic scale I think. Overall, there wasn't anything that I didn't like. Great work.

Can you please crit my songs? They're in the sig.
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yeah sure thanks for the crits. yes they are my first songs, i really like using strings they make the song sound so much better. And yes, all solos in the same scale
I thought the first effort "save me" was meh, but I really liked don't know... so much in fact that I added drums in some places... but I didn't save it because it's not mine to change... haha. Good work for firsts though... impressive.
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