#1
This is my second song, I got pretty cool music for it, its basically an Opeth kind of song. The chorus is reaaaaaally minor and acusticy sounding, but still heavy and cool, sorta like Opeth... Anywhoo

Silenced; we dont know it
We dont realise whats inside
Inside this box thats never been opened
We're not looking with our eyes.
Who are we to point the finger,
We should be pointing at ourselves.
Who cares; no-one cares,
All I know is that you a liar.

Chorus:
I dont care what you say;
You'll never be right.
Where were you when, we needed the you most
Why did you run and hide...

Why did you go create this wall,
Behond this wall who knows whats hidden; is it truth or lies
In my mind nothing is clear
I cannot see the fake nor the fear
Hidding away from nothing
All hope is lost
No-one hears what your saying
I will help you, no matter the cost


Crit4crit, and leave and suggestions please!
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Last edited by lespaulmarshall at Jul 1, 2006,
#3
Well I hope he could touch me a bit, after all, I would be able to say that Mr Akerfedt touched me... Thanks man
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LesPaulMarshalls ace!
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LesPaulMarshall, you friggin rock!
Quote by adrian_brown89
It's pretty hard to find someone as hardcore as Tom. The race for hardcore supremacy would be pretty close but i think Tom's got his nose just in front for now...