#1
i got a camaro for christmas
yeah, its really fast
I got a cool leather jacket
but it makes me look like a fag
i wrote a book about how to make a million dollors
and lost all my money...true story

ohh in telephone town you'll never frown
cuz this kids do heroin and coke
yeah they are cooler than you are,
but they hate the smell of the color blue
oh yeah, oh yeah, oh no, oh yes

hey fat kid your too fat to breath
hey fat kid you have no knees, ham legs
hey fat kid let me have your lunch
hey fat kid your in my mind laters

Chorus
this night makes me feel so right
in the dark where shadows thrive
I ride my broomstick to the moon
with harry h and his lovable goons
dont leave me hear to stay and rot
with all nothing stays with light and rock
Last edited by sodapop11 at Jul 1, 2006,
#2
is this supposed to follow any sort of theme?
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#3
I didn't mind it at all, in fact I kinda liked it. The only part I thought was bad was the line hate the smell of the color blue. That and mabye not so much fat kid repitition. Other than that, good job.
#4
so are you supposed to be the fat kid or the one on heroine and cocaine?? cuz from the sound of this song im thinkin its drugs
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#5
Quote by olp07
I didn't mind it at all, in fact I kinda liked it. The only part I thought was bad was the line hate the smell of the color blue. That and mabye not so much fat kid repitition. Other than that, good job.


are you fat?

no dude its just that i saw a fat kid and its so hard for him to breath or live that this song is about him....you might know him as trevor....so this goes out to him

that fat ****
Last edited by sodapop11 at Jul 1, 2006,
#6
forgive me for bitching at you 3 times in a row in one night (actually, you should apologize for MAKING me bitch), but you seem to have a chip on your shoulder. Anger is a great inspiration...unless you're angry just to be angry. You gotta have a reason, like someone ****ed your mother then shot her in the face or your girlfriend cheated on you with the fat kid in this story...but making fun of fat kids isn't funny to anyone older than 8.

..and read the goddamned rules. 1 post a day.
Originally posted by Grimster
This couple was doing like this romantic shoot like in there house, and all of a sudden a clown walked in and jizzed on the guys face. That is the true meaning of christmas.


Last edited by retch at Jul 1, 2006,
#7
lame rhyming, dont call my songs bad. especially without giving a reason why it is,
#8
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lame rhyming, dont call my songs bad. especially without giving a reason why it is,


ok you dumbass....wtf do you know about music? your on this forum. I went to harvard and i am a millionare you stupid idiot. I'll have your home burned down by the president. I will urinate on the ashes of what was your ****ty home. You welfare check bum. later
#10
The ONLY part I like is the chrorus. Other than that, I honestly don't even think that you were trying.
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#12
Quote by sodapop11
ok you dumbass....wtf do you know about music? your on this forum. I went to harvard and i am a millionare you stupid idiot. I'll have your home burned down by the president. I will urinate on the ashes of what was your ****ty home. You welfare check bum. later



I probably know more about music than you, and you're in a lyric forum, not music moron, maybe you should take that million and education to have a professional teach you how to write. As Willy Wonka said..I SAID GOOD DAY SIR
#13
Quote by lemay15
I probably know more about music than you, and you're in a lyric forum, not music moron, maybe you should take that million and education to have a professional teach you how to write. As Willy Wonka said..I SAID GOOD DAY SIR


Pissed.
#14
"I'm a millionaire...etc." You know what that little rant reminds me of? Let me give you a hint...it starts a "t" and ends with an "oddler." Oh...sodapop said it. THAT'S why. It all makes sense now.
Originally posted by Grimster
This couple was doing like this romantic shoot like in there house, and all of a sudden a clown walked in and jizzed on the guys face. That is the true meaning of christmas.


#15
GO TREVOR!!! FAT KIDS! WOOOOO! Ok so im kinda hyper, buit this song is great when you wanna get away from all the monotany and seriousness of other songs/lyrics!!!
I love it man.

Crit mine PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its called "oh,so,bad"
=D

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#16
Quote by franz.d.
GO TREVOR!!! FAT KIDS! WOOOOO! Ok so im kinda hyper, buit this song is great when you wanna get away from all the monotany and seriousness of other songs/lyrics!!!
I love it man.

Crit mine PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Its called "oh,so,bad"
=D

franZ xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx



yeah thanks man you rock well crit you song too