#2
First of all, I would call it "Fall to You." Its sounds alot less stupid.

Its alright. It kinda sounds like James Blunt. The singing is not bad. Same goes for the lyrics. Its just kind of, well, generic. The 2 chord verse gets a little repetitive. Maybe you could spice it up a little bit?
Originally Posted by guitar_freak333
I dont like death metal, I just see it as a bunch of hairy men playing the same riff over and over again exetremely fast.
#3
Tuning's slightly out (man I really am f*cking anal when it comes to being in tune). You've got a real James Blunt thing going on, which isn't a bad thing! You definately need to overdub another guitar to add something to the mix, because it does get slightly repetative, unfortunately.

You've got a really good voice, and with an added guitar picking or strumming harmonising chords toward the middle, the entire song would be awesome
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