Hmm, that sounded pretty weird for me with the bass, but without the bass it sounded a little better. The strumming part seems to be a little off, too. I liked the dark sound that it has to it. Just needs some fixing up and it'll sound good.

Can you please crit my songs? In the sig.
last.fm | Rush Hour | Dead Format
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pray for plagues or off the heezay by bring me the horizon both great songs specially when ur at a pit at trhe reall show