#1
this song took me way longer than normal (about 1 and half hours) anyway tell me what you think.... thanks

Intensions

Verse 1
Like a whipping willow in a cold autumn breeze
A man tries to hide behind its leaves
But as this man begins to clearly see
He discovers that eyes only deceive
Nothing?s ever straight forward as it seems
Even love is never trusted blindly

Chorus
But no matter what you believe
You can never fully see
What?s beneath one?s intensions

Verse 2
One mane could never calm a stormy sea
Even with faith in the almighty
A true friend knows where his trust always lies
Unlike the plastic one full of alibis?
Soon this trust will be shattered and broken
But your actions are louder when unspoken

Chorus
But no matter what you believe
You can never fully see
What?s beneath one?s intensions

Bridge
You may be trusting or insecure
Afraid, compromising or inferior
But actions speak louder than words
Even ones that seem so sincere

Verse 3
Like a locked house on a one man island
It can?t be trusted even alone and free
Some things have to be doubted someone?s to blame
Yet no one wants to be the one who claims
What will become of my built up image
If I let my ego become damaged

Chorus
But no matter what you believe
You can never fully see
What?s beneath one?s intensions


Stephen
#3
Some rhymes are forced, but you've got some really nice flow in there.

(oh, and you misspelled "intentions" )
Looking for my India/Django.