Well its pretty intense. It sort of sounds like you mixed it badly, the drums are too loud at some points, and the overall volume seems to fluctuate or pulse for the first half - unless you were going for that?

Listening to it sort of leaves me confused, disoriented and scared. I'm assuming thats what you wanted considering its about a nightmare you had. Its definately not in a stlye I listen to often, but if you were going for wierd and scary, then you're on the right track

The guitar right at the end sounds really different, what did you do there? What effects/overdubs and what not?
To see a World in a Grain of Sand
And a Heaven in a Wild Flower
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour
It is synth effect on my PODxt actually, with the mix set up to 100%. And yeah, it was meant to be weird. As hell.