#1
when the morning comes
will you go back to being alone
when the morning come
will you go back to being on your own

when the moring comes
will your soul be full of regrets
when the morning comes
when will you remember the things that you forget

I dont know
whats going on
I dont know what i've done wrong

I wonder and I think
of what I've done and how it was
and I'm Guilty for what i've done

when the morning comes
will all of us still pretend
when the morning comes
will all of us still be friends

when the morning comes
will you go back to being alone
when the morning come
will you go back to being on your own

I dont know
whats going on
I dont know what i've done wrong

I wonder and I think
of what I've done and how it was
and I'm Guilty for what i've done
#3
lol yea seems sliightllly nicked...but other than that i quite like it, especially the 'i dont know whats going on, i dont know what ive done wrong'- i can really relate to that part which is good. Other than that, maybe a few lines to polish just to fit the rhythm but i like it. Could you take a look at mine, its 'Let's Go Back;
#4
i wrote this song a while ago and since i heard the razorlight song i have thought about changing it because people will think that i just rip off people
Last edited by Eyeball_tickler at Jul 3, 2006,