#1
Here's my latest offering, won't go into detail on what it's about, lemme know what you think, good or bad

And I?ve so much left to say,
But will you ever listen?
?Cause I want to see you everyday,
I want to share in your intentions.
But you say you?re passed that stage,
And I can never change your mind?

And our time it goes too fast
Let?s go back to September?
I want to take you back
Want to make you remember,
What you saw in me?

All this talk of moving on,
It leaves me feeling broken.
Because I know he?ll let you down,
But he?s the one you?ve chosen.
And you say you?re passed that stage,
And I can never change your mind?

And our time it goes too fast
Let?s go back to September?
I want to take you back
Want to make you remember,
What you saw in me?

And I?ll still be around
Long after he's let you down
Yeah I?ll still be around
When this world lets you down
And I?ll still be around
Long after he's let you down
Yeah I?ll still be around
When this world lets you down
Last edited by goo_fan at Jul 3, 2006,
#3
i really like this
i can clearly see you put alot more thought into what you write unlike myself
thank you for the comment on mine and i would appreciate it if you could comment on anyy matirial i submit
#4
Quote by Eyeball_tickler
i really like this
i can clearly see you put alot more thought into what you write unlike myself
thank you for the comment on mine and i would appreciate it if you could comment on anyy matirial i submit


hey thanks, yeah i try to put thought into my stuff or it doesnt feel right playing it you know? i'll try to check out your stuff when you submit it too