#1
Hello , i posted soul reaper 3 days ago and i was veary pleased with the comments . Now i have finished recording a new song and i would like to get a comment about it .
I Composed the song and my cousin took care of the beats in the song ! Feel Free to add your songs here as well , It IS a crit for crit afterall..
The song is called "The Cursed night" enjoy .

http://hellpatrol.dmusic.com
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Last edited by Necrolust at Jul 5, 2006,
#2
pretty cool song, you and me would make a great song-writing pair haha, this is a lot thrashier than the other song, fairly smooth transitions frmo riff to riff... if you were able to clean up your tone itd sound hella heavy, is there bass on this recording? any plans for a solo?

EDIT: I'll have a new song for you to crit shortly, I'll update this post Thanks in advance
EDIT: https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=6055221
Last edited by juzcook at Jul 4, 2006,
#3
Awesome stuff man. Very heavy, kind of reminds me of a Pantera song, albeit without all the pinches and sqeals of that sort

Cool riff a minute and a half in - sounds good. The drumming fits pretty well, too.

The solo's cool - I like the tone. It'd be nice if it was longer tough =D

Overall good song - can be improved to make it a great song =)

Crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=382760
#4
Quote by yawn
Awesome stuff man. Very heavy, kind of reminds me of a Pantera song, albeit without all the pinches and sqeals of that sort

Cool riff a minute and a half in - sounds good. The drumming fits pretty well, too.

The solo's cool - I like the tone. It'd be nice if it was longer tough =D

Overall good song - can be improved to make it a great song =)

Crit for crit?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=382760



I cant think through the solos and i dont know why . It was just an improv with phazer , I dont know why the sound tends to get all fuzzy all the time , i hope i can fix it , anyway thank you man !
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#6
dmusic is probably jerking off ... Try later , maybe it'll worl then ! thnks for trying to take a look at it though !

http://hellpatrol.dmusic.com

^ That's it !!! thats the right one , i changed my bands name
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#7
great riffs man.
just needs some vocals and ur ****ing ready to go

hell yeah.


-edit-
forgot your solo!!!!!
#8
haha , yeah ... the solo will be deleted as soon as I re-record the song with out the god damn fuzzy sound ..the solo was awfull man , i cant listen to it , so I will come up with a new one :P . thanks for the comments bro !
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#9
Quote by juzcook
pretty cool song, you and me would make a great song-writing pair https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=6055221


back off he's mine!!


awesome heavy headbanging track!!! drums are excellent! i like this song better than soul reaper overall! good lead guitar although i was expecting it to come in sooner and better tbh.

as my guitar is in C tuning im wanting to do something heavier than my other stuff shortly.
#10
If your song would include a part with a acoustic guitar (or something another) the song would be more interisting. The song is really good allthough I don't like this kind of music.
#11
Pretty sweet riffage man. I liked your tone but the recording i think made it sound a bit muffled. I didnt like the solo too much. Add some pinch harmonics and its great

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#12
good, very good. It's not my style of music but I still liked it. Just please don't put those sceamo lyrics over top of it, because that's why it's not my type of music Overall I think you are more technically sound than those stupid screamo bands (or atleast the ones i've heard) so just get out there and make some money, haha.

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#13
I;m thinking of sharpening the sound a littler bit , i wont put those scream lyrics , i hate those , i want to put some vocals into it but i dont know how , if you have any ideas ,pleas inlighten me ! thank you ! I think I already critted yours .
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#14
Very Pantera-ish sounding. Oh yeah there we go, making me wanna headbang.
Whaaaaa sweet riff at 1:33, smooth changed between both riffs. An acoustic solo in the likes of Nevermore's Psalm of Lydia would have souded pretty cool IMO right after that riff.

A Whole lot heavier than Soul Reaper (dont get me wrong, that one sounds awesome too)

Solo is kinda fuzzy, alot of fuzziness, eh?

Nice riffage overall, once again good recording quality and chops. Good job on it.
#15
Thank you , I finally fixed the fuzz thingy that was hunting my song recordings , i have a new song at http://hellpatrol.dmusic.com it is called the omen with good quality and without fuzz..

This particular song ( the cursed night ) was intended to make peoples heads bang up and down , the sound quality though made that not yet possible . all the songs will be remastered without fuzz and then posted in this site ! thank you very very much for your attention and for your participation in critting my crappy songs !
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#16
I like this song alot riffs are intricate and sound well thought out, do you record with like a pedal directly into your computer? you should get one with amp cab simulation or mic up an amp, anyway back to the crit, breakdown type portion is nice, solo is cool, a little short and simple but solos aren't important in this type of music, I do wish that this had vocals because I want to hear what the finished product is gonna be, good job man
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#17
This particular song was recorded with a pedal , but the new one i have posted now in ug was created another way.
I recorded the drums with cubase and then with clean guitar thus I can put distortion with guitar rig ! it sounds preety awesome .! , thank you for your crit !

and btw , check out my new song

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=389441
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