#1
i once heared a truly terrible sound; i thought sound was my friend
from what pit of hell has this scream excaped?

six places in my head swell up simitanously
the one in the back left is to the point of pain
i start to get the vertigo which triggers the fear
i'm falling within myself and the panic expontnially exsagrates this horror
i try to relax and think of a happy place; which works until i forget what it was
and now i'm back, to a world i feel like i'm about to vanish from
my signal is wavering and the transmitter is about to quit
then i'll be gone
no more will i be broadcasted to the world
my energy will cease and i will be no more
is it this nasty drug that plays with my thought?
is it the decay of my body from all the poison?
is my mind failing from poor nutriution?
or am i truly finally going crazy?

i should drink a glass of water and talk to somone
that will get my mind off this parnoid illiussion
i need to meditate on nothing
to clear my mind and start at zero
where is the chime to clear the air?
that devilish scream seems to linger; a tritone that never resolved
it has made a home in my spinal coloum along with all the other bad energy
be gone devil spirit and let me live in peace
#2
Awesome, man. I totally dig. How heavy is that? There gonna be digeridoo?
"The world is quiet here."

With all due respect,
G
#4
Heck yeah! digeridoo is, like, the best - EVER! even better than mouth organ or accordian
"The world is quiet here."

With all due respect,
G
#5
i didnt really like it, in alot of places it seemed like you were forcing out some decent vocabulary.

just my 2 cents
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#6
What ARE you talking about!? that vocabulary is strong and detailed! there may be a few spelling errors, but... who cares!? the vocab flows fine.
"The world is quiet here."

With all due respect,
G
#7
thanks greaser, digeridos deffenitly do rock! they're also really good for meditation
though there really hard to incorporate within contemporary music (i'm still going to do it of course!)
#8
Quote by fatcat125
thanks greaser, digeridos deffenitly do rock! they're also really good for meditation
though there really hard to incorporate within contemporary music (i'm still going to do it of course!)



You know what rlse digeridos go well with? Combat boots, bagpipes, and belly dancing. really. It's kinda zany, but, honestly, it's cool.
"The world is quiet here."

With all due respect,
G