#1
Initiative

You prefer to be indoors
while we want to go outside
But now I bought a car
So we don't need you to drive

The situation
Keeps replaying in my mind
This is a problem
I can't give time
a chance, I have to choose
Either way I seem to lose

You make what the people want
While we make what they despise
Divided times is what we face
For your not in the right place

The situation
Keeps replaying in my mind
This is a problem
I can't give time
a chance, I have to choose
Either way I seem to lose

With you in the puzzle
we fall apart
Either way we fall
Back to the start
When there was no hope or initiative
To start a melody that lives

To Return the Favour

Every day I'm growing older
But you never seem to age
There have been many letters
Where you ask how things have changed

All I say is I've been better
Not dishonest in any way
So to return the favour
You tell me it'll be okay

Its odd that I have trust in you
When I havn't seen your face in weeks
We never really even spoke
Even when you were in arms reach

All I say is I've been better
Not dishonest in any way
So to return the favour
You tell me it'll be okay

Any tips on how to change some of the lines, so that it isn't as boring and doesn't make me seem as if I have a C average for English?
#2
Read the rules.
You know the bitter comes out better on a stolen guitar
You're the BLESSED, we're the Spiders from Mars!

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