#1
Any opinions or comments would be appreciated, crit 4 crit. Pretty lame title, but I couldn't think of anything better at the moment.

I'm driving down the road
just me and my demons
I'm going to take a trip
I'm going to reach the end
of the world or the stars
but strictly in my head
I'll drive until I'm lost
or I'll drive until I'm dead

We are always
trying to get somewhere
why can't we just stop
and let ourselves live our lives here?
Why does every
body in this life
think it's a journey
can't we get there once or twice?

(Chorus)
It's just a.....
never ending road trip
it's kind of fun at first
until you reach death
and realize you're no further than birth
We're like a.....
hamster in a ball
on a treadmill
first we're trying to get a dollar
then we're dying to get a million

Middle of the road
I stop and take a rest
still got halfway to go
and I don't want to go the rest
because I'm having fun here
why can't I just stay?
There's cars all around me
forcing me out of the way

I don't know why
we are always trying
we are always striving
towards something on the horizon
like we're waiting for a sun
that doesn't seem to be rising
and next thing you know
we are all dying
#3
Pretty good. I like the metaphors, similies and all that poetic stuff

What genre would you play it too?
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#4
1st part was good 2nd part was bad 3rd(chorus) part i threw up a little stopped at the hamster part
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