#1
http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoID=899384770&n=2

what do you think of my song... sorry for the bad sound quality(everything sounds flat)... i try to mess around with octaves and ****... keep in mind that this was recorded with an off brand digital camera placed above my amp and ive only been playing for four months
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#3
thanks
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#4
I'm sorry but i didn't like it too much. it just seemed so slow, and it didn't sound like you were playing with any emotion.you need a little more to the song. o and your bends, you should work on those; it didn't sound like you were hitting the right pitch.
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#5
hey! pretty good for playing for just 4 months!
um. so u kno the bends that r in the first couple
minutes of the song? well try to bend it a bit more
so that it gets to the half step above it, in this
case it's:
A G G# bend to A and then back down to G# right?
correct me if im wrong plz!
o. and it sounds a little off cause i don't think that
G# is in this key...maybe try bending a different
note.
o. and one more thing. if u have a friend that plays
guitar or somethin maybe u can have him/her play
chords to back u up or somethin so it sound fuller.
#6
thanks^
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#7
hey man,

keep up the good work, it's a good feeling when you start to write your own stuff isn't it? So far I think you're on the right track, but you are right the sound quality isn't the greatest. I think your song would have sounded better if you would have played it faster and connected the riffs together more, but that's something to work on.

In no time you'll be makin some kickass songs no doubt

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#8
It's an okay start to songwriting, but you really gotta develop it beyond that main riff. Chords would definitely make this song a lot more interesting. Also, as the other guy said, a lot of the bends are really flat. Try to add more dynamics to this song to make it more exciting. You're off to a good start, though - at least you're not just playing the same three chords over and over again for three minutes

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