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All You See

Slowly drifting in this unknown parallel

Wake up to familiar faces
Stuck in the same places
This must be a vague dream
A nightmare haunting me endlessly
But I swear this is the last time

This must be a faint illusion
Like a mirage dillusion
A false reality has taken life
The monster feeds on my mortality
I cant even remember
What came before all this

And all you see is the same as yesterday
Living in a cycle that never ends
Pay the same price everyday
Somehow I must make amends

Slowly drifting in this unknown parallel
Feeble attempts to hold on to everything i once knew

I cannot bear another day in the fire
The cycle rots all my desire
Another second and I'll hit the floor
I dont want this anymore

It's time to break free

And all you see is the same as yesterday
Living in a cycle that never ends
Pay the same price everyday
Somehow I must make amends

I have broken the cycle
Room For Error

Shows
6.30.05: 3 Doors Down, Staind, Breaking Benjamin
9.22.05: Disturbed, Ill Nino, 10 Years
4.1.06: Sevendust, Nonpoint
10.2.06: Red Hot Chili Peppers, The Mars Volta
11.21.06: Disturbed, Stone Sour, Flyleaf, Nonpoint
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Room For Error

Shows
6.30.05: 3 Doors Down, Staind, Breaking Benjamin
9.22.05: Disturbed, Ill Nino, 10 Years
4.1.06: Sevendust, Nonpoint
10.2.06: Red Hot Chili Peppers, The Mars Volta
11.21.06: Disturbed, Stone Sour, Flyleaf, Nonpoint