ok the singing isn't the best, but cut me some slack.

i think it would sound better with some drums.

let me know what you think.

just go over the the right and click "The heart never learns."

hey, while you're there, listen to some of the other ones!
Definately you need some work on the singing but you did good enough , the music was satysfying and pleasant though the vocals bellitled it in some point . Try getting a better tone , filter the crunch guitar somehow making it even better than it is ..
Overall , good job , just work on the vocals ..

Do you want to crit my songs? here it is :


and if you have time , crit another one i made !


thank you
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