#1
Crit 4 Crit mofos.

Life less eyes, broken dreams
Butterflies have lost their wings
Rainbows are shade of grey
Off the path, cant find his way

If you could see the world
Through his eyes
There?s no hope
Love has died

Only listens to silence
Greatest peace was the violence
On the way, life turned black
And the tree of life, is burnt to ash

If you could see the world
Through his eyes
There?s no hope
Emptiness thrives

Love is a lie
Life is a lie

If you could see the world
Through his eyes
There?s no hope
Lifes a lie(love has died, Emptiness thrives) x3
#4
Quote by Wingswonttakeme
Great song, but I find everyone is using the same words these days...


I feal like I have seen the same old poem everyday. With some tricky metaphors, but just seem bland to me. So I wrote these instead.

Quote by TrigFunction
hewwo, i think you kind of really went... cliche with this one Its all been done many times but the one thing i WILL give you is it has excellent rhyme and flows well

-Mike


Well unless I write a song about Goddess Bunny( which I will), it seems like every thing has been done and it gets cliche. This just kind of goes with a little 5 song demo tape I am making. But I will try to mix things up in the future.
Last edited by guitar? at Jul 5, 2006,