This is a work in progress but I think its has alot of potential. I think the solo has some neat ideas in it as well. Ill crit your tab if you post it.
I liked the first bit, but when you put the rest in, out of no where it started to suck, but it had a great melody and a great lead. And another thing you could do is learn how to use powertab, and how to justify the notes, it makes it alot easier.
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Well it isnt hard to bend a string that has the tension of a piece of well cooked spaghetti, especially when you have hands like goalkeeper gloves

My songs: (more to come) (C4C's)
Screams fell silent underneath the black sun
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