#1
verse 1

I said it once, I'll say it again
I'm tired of just being your friend
I'm tired of playing, playing your games
Since that night things just haven't been the same

verse 2

Your voice, it makes me yelp
It's something I just can't help
And your stare, oh your stare
Makes me feel like your the only one here

chorus

But you took my heart and you threw it away
After so long of being locked in your cage
I'm done with you, your done with me
This is the last time we'll ever be

solo

verse 3

I left you out on the street
Go find some other guy to manipulate
I'm done, It's been so long
But now I'm FREE!

(repeat) chorus
#2
I can't say I like it. It's something I can't put my finger on that just... doesn't click. It might be because I think it's too simple in its construction and word choice, and it's not clever enough to get away with it. Sorry; better luck next time, I suppose.
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#4
I liked the first two lines quite a bit. I got a nice feel from them and the rest wasn't quite what i expected...a turn for the worse.

I'd say use more colouful words and such, but I'm no expert lyricist. Not bad though.