#1
Yeah its about I got this solo thing going. Basically this is just a demo of the first song I want make for a solo project called "Castle".

Please listen and tell me what you think, I will glady listen to any of your originals and tell you what I think.

(P.S. Im aware I made some stupid mistakes haha, rememeber this is only a demo.)


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=568483
Last edited by stratstrummer40 at Jul 7, 2006,
#5
*listens*
I like it alot.
Wish i could hear you sing more though during the first verse or whatevs its called.
Also. I would get your voice higher. Maybe try to match up with the Chords playing or get along the same note. I think thatd make ti sound a whole lot better then it is now.
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#7
your playing is really solid, great work. how long have you played guitar for?
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#9
I honestly thought this was brilliant, the only problem i had(it is a fairly large problem)is your voice! I don't mean to say you have a bad voice, it's just masked by the music. Really, crank the volume on your mic. I also think you sung a little low at times, that it seemed like you were out of key. Other than that, like i said, brilliant.
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#10
wow, thank you all for the support. haha i didnt know it was THAT good. but yeah ill keep it up and next time ill work on the vox more. thank you all.
#11
wow loving the start. Nice playing. Wish the vox where a bit clearer, but what i can hear they sound great, Stone roses-esqe, Wow I really like this. A little too much echo on vox. This is awesome though love the Strings at the end. Its the kind of song that takes you on a trip, and before you know it youre at the end. Awesome. If you could just clean up the vocals a little bit, but thats minor.
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#12
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your playing is really solid, great work. how long have you played guitar for?


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about 3 years. but for the first year i never touched my guitar haha.


I find it hard to play a guitar if you dont touch it...

Sounds good tho, i'd suggest lowering the reverb on your voice a lot, also turn them up a bit. work on equalizing your instruments so it gets a fuller sound (also a TON cleaner) and that will stop the cliping. So other than that, i really like the guitar, good work.

P.S. As a comment to another post u left : "I really don't understand what everyone is talking about in regards to the acoustic and the bass. I don't hear anything wrong with that." -- Thats because you have to train your ear a bit.. i noticed a lot of frequency meshin in your song as well, so im assuming you havent produced MUCh stuff yet.

Anyways, just crit'in :P. Keep up the good work!
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#13
^ Yeah man, its all good. I mean with your song I just felt the bass didnt do much but almost take away from the feel of the acoustic guitar. Thats just what I thought, other then that it was marvelous.

And yeah, this was totally rough, Im going over a pals house at some point to sit down and try it get it all figured out along with some other tunes. Thanks guys for the crits, I really appreciate it
#14
sorry for the late crit.

I really love this intro and the chords, can't really hear the vocals, turn down the music or boost the vox what you want to do, the bits i can hear sounds like you have a nic voice, and the guitar is just brilliant, so awesome man. Yes man just up those vocals, but dude the music is wonderful, I love it all. The music is really flawless everything i think flowed together just brilliantly, awesome man, the only problem is how the vocals are mixed. other than that everything perfect, great song, keep it up. love it.
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#15
hey there.....wow this is real good. i really like the music and tunes that come together around 3min....really cool....but yeh the vox are a bit soft and low.....real nice work tho, im impressed