#1
Background info: I'm 16, been writing songs for 6 years now. I started writing because of my inspiration for this song, my best friend, whose name means hope.
Please provide feedback!!!!


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Can you see?
Can you see the secrets
That lurk behind stormy seas of Grey?
Can you feel?
Can you feel the anger
Brimming to the top of that volcanic heart?

And everyday your words cut into me
Pushing me farther from the clouds.
How you ever got so high beats me.


Rising up
upon all your dreams,
I cant wait til you fall hard.
No ones there
Picking up your pieces
Free to rise but not fall.


Tears fall from the sky
Every time you cry.
A girl stands, arms open wide
Wishing to get out.


Cant you hear?
Cant you hear
The sound of a yearning heart.
Can you taste?
Can you taste it,
Its coming once again.



Rising up
Among all your dreams.
I cant wait til you fall hard.
No ones there
Picking up your pieces.
Free to rise and fall


Tears fall from the stars
Everytime you cry.
A girl stands, arms open wide,
Wishing to get out out of here.
And everytime I see
Her face turned to heaven
I pray, I pray, I pray
That shell get through

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again, provide feedback!
Last edited by residentSHIELD at Jul 7, 2006,
#5
great good flow, some very ncie imagery in the whole girl in the rain thing. I love ti.
songs: Left Behind choices
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