#1
Silence

VERSE 1
our opinions get pushed aside
when we speak they run and hide
its as if they have lied
you can see it with your eyes!
Its like it's written in the skies!
silence!x2

CHORUS
we can never go quiet if everyone yells and cries it
"silent; we won't become"(with back up vocals)
They try to buy our souls to sell our lives
we can't go quiet we yell and cry it
"silent; we won't become"(back up vocals again)

VERSE 2
teachers teaching us how to live
two faced politicians unable to forgive
we sit, we stare
we watch, and prepare
you can see all the lies!
faces stricken with demise!
silence!x2

(CHORUS)

BRIDGE
the voices sound almost hypnotic
this is making me psychotic
everything that was fine is now chaotic
weve lost the world's peace
with curropt police
unlock the cage
unleash this rage!
silence!x2

silent we wont become(with back up vocals)


******comment me please******
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
Last edited by mitch155 at Aug 8, 2006,
#2
cool i like it i think about a few things as you do....
you can work on it a little bit, but its good..
#3
thanks
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
#4
cage and rage, sounds like u got a bit of the smashing pumpkins in there. the rest sounds very sincere.
#5
thanks!!
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
#7
Sounds like you're pissed off. Is it a punk song, cause it sure sounds like one (I like punk, so don't be insulted). Good job.
#8
yeh, i was kinda pissed off...and still am....lol....but i was thinking more of a metal song but i might try to style it punk....
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
#9
Uh...is this kind of like a anarchy thing or something? I can definitely here it as a punk song. You transmit the feeling of frustration and anger very very well. Sometimes the flow is off, but with music i bet you could smooth it out.


Hey, if you havent already, can you check out one of my pieces, doesnt matter which one. And if you'll do both, ill be glad to crit another of yours.
thx
#10
thanks alot....and i have checked out a midmorning summer and i totally love the song...
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
#11
Nice song. Very different from 7 years. I always liked political songs. This song shows your versatility. The whole song really sumed up how i feel, especially verse 2. That's awesome.
#12
yeh thanks....it is quite different....i guess my writing goes with how im feeling at the moment....
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp
#13
I don't think this one is as good as your others but probably its partly just personal taste... probably the best thing about this is it's obviously so heartfelt and you wrote it with a real purpose in mind. Not the best lyrics I've ever seen but a fantastic message and if you get some good guitar riffs going with it it should be great.
#14
thanks alot!
My Gear:
Washburn Lyon Tele Copy
ESP LTD MH250NT
Samick D7-CE :
Digitech Death Metal Pedal
Dunlop Jimi Hendrix Wah
Peavy Renown Solo Series Amp