#1
yeah....i got all the music and stuff figured out but the lyrics are "iffy"
so crit my **** if u want

did you know
we never knew eachother
that we never got along
that we never really talked
till a day ago
and that I really wanted to get to know you
but...did you know

you really only have one true friend
that would stick till the end
and I really wouldnt mind being with you
you really only have one true friend
that would stick till the end
and I really wouldnt mind being with you

did you know
nothing can stay
something has to go
how could i not see
you were so low
cause you just never wanted to know me
but...did you know

you really only have one true friend
that would stick till the end
and I really wouldnt mind being with you
you really only have one true friend
that would stick till the end
and I really wouldnt mind being with you

take a chance on this life you got
it wont come back in the end
so just make a change of pace
and start all over again

you really only have one true friend
that would stick till the end
and I really wouldnt mind being with you

you really only have one true friend {i will be right there}
that would stick till the end {and never leave your side}
and I really wouldnt mind being with you {cause im a friend to you}


so... crit?
#2
really good

i like the chorus a lot

what genre would this be?

crit 4 crit
ok, yeah. my name is silly because I signed up when I was 13.

BEDBUGS
#5
nice.
God, people gotta be so mean!
Don't stop if I fall, and don't look back...Oh baby don't stop, bury me and fade to black.
#7
o...ok

i understood that after i posted

srry....forgot to edit.

great song though

crit, maybe?
ok, yeah. my name is silly because I signed up when I was 13.

BEDBUGS
#8
sure

these are the chords(power then tho)

verse=D, C#, A, A, C#, D, E, A, C#, D, B

chorus=D, C#, A, A, E, C#, D, C#, B, A, E, C#, D, C#

Bridge= A, E, B, D, C#, B,

enjoy