#1
I have been away for a week and I really didn't have time to really sit down and think deeply so I wrote a few lines every few days or so and I cleaned it up a tad.


And we will stand on this calussed sunrise,
On days we tend to dread the sunset.
Just crack my spine and ill be on my way.

Karmas passed the point of satisfaction.
Her pupils dialated.
Her virgin ears left to bleed on the floor.
Lets make believe this perfection wasn't all you had to give.
I wish you well,
I'm wishing you to death.

Forget the art of sculping a sea porcelain faces
Just to please the heavens above.

Take it or leave it,
Or follow just like lemmings.
Just promise me i'll live to tell the tale
I know something can't be right.
When these foriegn accents
Are starting to make sense to me.

Forget the art of sculping a sea perfect porcelain faces
Just to please the heavens above.
Quick and quiet as a tomb
Wity comebacks that you assume
Will lead you on your way back home.
#2
hmm....i liked what you had but....to me it was offbeat per say...
"Take it or leave it,
Or follow just like lemmings"

i liked that because when i was a kid...i played the game for super nintendo called lemmings...
I guess you gotta write about politics to not be emo
#3
this song was, I don't know, not good. it seems kinda vague, and there was nothing that really stood out, except for the title. meh, 6/10.
B.C. RICH